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PrussiaXReader My Hero Part 1

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Prussia and Spain by CosplayerAxel
(Note: This was edited after I got a valuable critique from wheeljackpwnz. Hope I made an improvement!)

     You opened the school doors quickly and took a giant step inside. You shut the door as quickly as you opened it. You sighed a breath of relief. It had been raining this morning and you were soaked. Your plaid skirt and white button up shirt had gotten darker from the rain. You looked at your surroundings and you noticed the hallway was quite large. On the right side of the hallway was your average gray lockers. You started walking and you noticed that the lockers were painted nicely with a glossy shine but ruined with sharpie pen drawings like B+R in a heart. The air smelled of mud and wet dog. 'Seems like I wasn't the only one who got soaked' you thought to yourself when all of a sudden your slipped. Your heart skipped a beat as you felt air rush to your face. You landed on the floor harshly as you heard a 'squish' sound. You looked behind you and your eyes widened. You left a track of mud footprints on the polished green floor. You got up and dusted yourself off. You looked both ways to see if anyone was watching and luckily no one was in the hallway. You then started off to your homeroom.

Your face flushed from embarrassment as you saw the janitor heading your way. Your mind went blank as your heart started pounding against your ribcage which vibrated your whole upper body. You saw your homeroom door a few inches away and quickly rushed to it. Just as you reached the door it flung open. The door caught you before you had time to retreat. The sharp pain you felt on your face surged through your whole head making you feel slightly dizzy. Your vision went blurry as you fell back. You could hear muffled voices while your ears rang loudly. You could faintly see in the distance people running towards you. Someone was holding you up. Who was it? Your blurry vision only allowed you to see a silver blob and faintly hear a rough voice. "Hey Mädchen! Are you ok?" All colors soon faded to white as your body gently drifted into unconsciousness.

~~~~~~~~~~TIME SKIP~~~~~~~~~~~

Your eyes opened and you sat up. You quickly regretted that decision when your head like a hammer was pounding against your skull. You laid back down only to spot someone on the side of your bed. It was a teenage boy that had his head rested in his arms sleeping soundly. You cheeks turned crimson as you noticed his handsome face. His hair was gray like a cloudy storm. His long lashes thick and black. He had the skin of a porcelain doll and pink chapped lips. Why was he sleeping on your bed? Was he the one that brought you here?

The albino boy soon stirred awake only for his ruby red eyes to meet yours. He lifted himself off your bed and shut his eyes as he stretched. He met your eyes again and smirked. "Glad to see your finally avake. I got tired of vaiting for you so I dozed off myself." His thick German accent was rough yet soothing. "I'm Gilbert," he said confidently. "I'm _____," you replied as you sat up again but this time the pain was bearable. He smiled but that smile soon turned into an awkward smile. His cheeks were soon flooded with a soft pink color. "Ehhh sorry about bumping into you like zat." He said while rubbing the back of his neck. "O-Oh! I uh don't mind at all! It happens all the time! Really!" You exclaimed putting your hands up defensively. Gilbert let out a relieved sigh as his eyes softened. 

"Hey um what time is it?" Gilbert looked at the clock and then at you. "About 9 o' clock." He said calmly. "What?!" You blurt out as you look at the clock. You looked back at him and asked, "Don't you have classes or something?" He chuckled and responded, "Haha of course I do! I just zought it vould be more awesome to stay with you." He said inching closer. Your cheeks flared red as your eyes widened. "W-What?!" He quickly retreated and laughed once more. "Haha just kidding!" You sighed and then glared at him. "I skip my classes anyvay so I couldn't care less. But now I have an excuse!" Gilbert continued laughing as your eyebrows just scrunched even more. Who did this guy think he was? "So thats what I am to you? A pass out of class?" You yelled angrily. He stopped laughing only to stare at you with complete seriousness. "No of course no-" He was cut off with you turning your head saying "Whatever." You got out of bed ignoring the small pain that was left in your head and made your way to the door. "Hey vait up-" He was cut off once more with your response as you were already at the door. "Goodbye Gilbert." You were about to take a step out when you heard a desperate voice yell, "____!" You turned around to a sad look on Gilbert's face. You suddenly felt a pang of guilt but that was changed when his frown turned into a smirk and said sarcastically, "Don't let the door hit you on the vay out, again!" You stared at him with a shocked face and then became furious once again. You quickly turned away and stomped off. "Jerk!" You yelled as tears in your eyes threatened to spill.
By the way, I'll love you forever if you got my joke.
B+R = Belarus+Russia

This is my first reader insert so bear with me.
Sorry it was so short. This story is going to be based on a dream I had so it should be interesting! This is going to be a total failure

Part 1: you are here

Part 2:[link]

Part 3:[link]

Part 4: [link]

Part 5: Coming Soon

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This is a good start! There's just one thing: When a new person talks, you have to start a new paragraph, it helps keep things from getting confusing. :) Can't wait to keep reading!